"M_a_r_c" <jac### [at] wanadoofr> wrote:
> Hello folks
> lacking inspiration but bounded indoor by the hot weather, I unburried an
> old scene.
> I rebuilt the aqueduct, recoded the growth of the papyrus plants, fixed
> uv_mapping on the palmtrees truncs and added some human presence
>
> comments, critics and advices are welcome :)
>
> Marc

Very nice! I love the lighting and mood.  Is that even some foam I see on the
waves near the shore!?  Great job!

For next steps, I think the aqueduct could use some grunge and a bit of wear and
tear.  I looks like it's new construction, which is fine, but to me, I think it
would have more interest if it felt like it had been around a while.  I think
the palm trees look a little too straight to me -- I don't live near palm trees
though, so maybe that's realistic.

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